Wednesday, June 5, 2019

A Cocktail Far Too Bland Comments

Rating: 5.0

Old for sure, no more good nor yet grand,
A drink not in flavour, stale, too bland,
Cast has the king old skin,
The new one not yet seen,
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Aniruddha Pathak
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Adeeb Alfateh 26 July 2019

Cast has the king old skin, The new one not yet seen, BEAUTIFUL LIMERICK GREAT 10+++

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Aniruddha Pathak 26 July 2019

Thanks dear poet Adeeb A for the feedback and rating.

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Edward Kofi Louis 08 June 2019

Kin! ! Old skin. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Aniruddha Pathak 09 June 2019

Thanks for visiting and commenting

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