Oh, she was ever so beautiful
As she stood out in the grass
A pristine white fence surrounds her
There's no way I could simply pass
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you have an eye for detail, a heart for appreciation and a blessed hand for spiining magic out of simple words.... wow is the word for this one....
i wish i had known such a pal as you decribe... thank you gra
a beautiful write on a clydesdale pal...pleasing to mind...fluent flow of words...a poem, well written...10
A sweet poem for our beautiful four legged friends. People used to depend on them for travel, now horses are quickly becoming too expensive to keep. They are such gentle giants and only want to please us...Good write! ....kathy
touching words about a horse that's more - not just kiss her nose; kiss her toes and see!
There is but detail in this one. I love the way you used it and kept me captivated. NICELY DONE! ! !
A wonderful piece about a beautiful animal, lovely imagery seen through your words!
Now this is a work of beauty....the leading to the end where a clydesdale pal is revealed... unto the structure of such flow in verse....beautiful just beautiful.....
A beautiful animal, a beautiful poem, i can see that you love horses, as i do, you keep on writting young lady, O-Ho Osceola
I can picture the scene, Marilyn!