The clouds,
Elegantly do they stride
In their heavenly chambers
In the sky.
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Very well written. Congratulations on having it chosen as poem of the day four years in a row on December 9!
Very simple yet very elegant. The clouds come alive in your poem and your distress about your incarceration appears to be real. Thanks, Kevin. This is my favorite poem.
Lovely piece I can feel it, thank you for share! .. I guess the clouds are probably smiling whispering: hey man smile with me, it's ok, you get to smell the flowers, climb a tree or simply take a shower, a thing I badly want yet.. never can...
Oh this is marvelous! I am so glad to have come upon this simple and elegant piece of poetry. I cannot think of a more grand escape. Take me with you!
A well crafted and poignant write! 10+++ Keep it up, you got what it takes to make it through the Poetry's World, talent! Love and Peace for always! ...
Kevin you were born to fly with you poetic wings! Fly my friend! FLY!
yes we have a body with just legs..a mind with wings to fly....lovely
Thanks for all the support, everyone. Honestly, I didn't know this had been poem of the day four years in a row, and was very surprised to see the voiceover for it. I'm thinking of doing my own considering how many people like it. Thanks a lot guys :)