Thursday, October 15, 2009

A Cloudy Morning Comments

Rating: 4.2

The clouds,
Elegantly do they stride
In their heavenly chambers
In the sky.
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Kevin Maroney
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Kevin Maroney 05 February 2015

Thanks for all the support, everyone. Honestly, I didn't know this had been poem of the day four years in a row, and was very surprised to see the voiceover for it. I'm thinking of doing my own considering how many people like it. Thanks a lot guys :)

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Kim Barney 09 December 2014

Very well written. Congratulations on having it chosen as poem of the day four years in a row on December 9!

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Rajnish Manga 09 December 2014

Very simple yet very elegant. The clouds come alive in your poem and your distress about your incarceration appears to be real. Thanks, Kevin. This is my favorite poem.

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Elena Sandu 09 December 2014

Lovely piece I can feel it, thank you for share! .. I guess the clouds are probably smiling whispering: hey man smile with me, it's ok, you get to smell the flowers, climb a tree or simply take a shower, a thing I badly want yet.. never can...

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Godfrey Morris 09 December 2013

Short yet powerful.. Lovely thoughts, lovely write.

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nice.........................

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Sara Fielder 09 December 2012

Oh this is marvelous! I am so glad to have come upon this simple and elegant piece of poetry. I cannot think of a more grand escape. Take me with you!

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Leslie Philibert 09 December 2012

Great job...well written

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Milica Franchi De Luri 09 December 2011

Lovely, poetic little poem

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Romeo Della Valle 15 May 2011

A well crafted and poignant write! 10+++ Keep it up, you got what it takes to make it through the Poetry's World, talent! Love and Peace for always! ...

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William Fc Smyth 19 April 2011

Nice one Kev! very well into nature.Great!

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Kevin you were born to fly with you poetic wings! Fly my friend! FLY!

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Samanyan Lakshminarayanan 15 October 2009

yes we have a body with just legs..a mind with wings to fly....lovely

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