Friday, May 1, 2020

A Cloudy Day Comments

Rating: 4.9

Clouds like cotton wool
On a fairly cloudy day
They adorn the sky
Until they are forcibly
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Rose Marie Juan-austin
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Rob Lamberton 24 February 2023

Ahh, I've seen that happen!

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Anjandev Roy 01 May 2021

Excellent piece.....thank u....

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Soran M. H 18 August 2020

Clouds like cotton wool X Displaced by the furious winds. ........... So heart touching imagery and scene

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Soran M. H 18 August 2020

Here we can see the global wrestle between the peaceful weak, and the strong wicked, but in the form of poetic metaphor, there are more than one explanation of this wonderful poetry, and this is evidence of its excellency, Rose always makes big and beautiful works from daily simple things, well done and thanks

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Dr Antony Theodore 14 May 2020

They adorn the sky Until they are forcibly Displaced by the furious winds.. cloud and the wind, the consolation until force drives it away. vry fine poem, also symbolic. tony

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Mahtab Bangalee 14 May 2020

Clouds like cotton wool On a fairly cloudy day....... expressed beautifully; superb poem penned

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Edward Kofi Louis 09 May 2020

Furious winds! ! ! ! Clouds like cotton wool musing along. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Harindhar Reddy 05 May 2020

Beautifully expressed clouds are like cotton wool.....They adorn the sky until they for forcibly displaced by furious winds....love those lines which can create powerful images on any brain like a rainbow after the rain! 10++

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Bernard F. Asuncion 04 May 2020

An amazingly penned composition. Well crafted, dear ate Rose....10++💗💗💗

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Chinedu Dike 03 May 2020

Well articulated and nicely brought forth with artistic brilliance. Thanks for sharing, Rose.

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Kostas Lagos 03 May 2020

You ve captured this image delightfully! 10!

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Anjandev Roy 03 May 2020

Fantastic write......thanks for sharing. anjandev roy.

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The first line of the poem should be read; " Clouds like cotton wool" The system messed up the words.... I cannot edit the poem as the right word is reflected in the draft....

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Rose Marie Juan-austin

Rose Marie Juan-austin

Laoag City, Philippines
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