A Cloud - Shaded Sun:(July 27th,2020) Poem by DM W

A Cloud - Shaded Sun:(July 27th,2020)

Rating: 5.0


A cloud- shaded sun:
Smears of yellow and blue;
Whispers of greyish white.

A Cloud - Shaded Sun:(July 27th,2020)
Friday, August 28, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: skies,summer
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Shaun Cronick 28 August 2020

A fine and well written haiku Dominic. You are nature's observer and see things some might simply miss or ignore. You like any gifted poet tune in with what is display. And then craft and weave into wondrous poems magical moments others might simply dismiss. A full score and your poem like an emerging sun from vivid colourful clouds will warm the cockles of any reader's heart. Take care and well done sir.

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