Monday, February 19, 2007

A Cloud Portrait Comments

Rating: 3.8

Arms hold the soundless music of the sky.
The lyricism of the soul burns high.
Brief poems dance with distance against space,
Snow interlocks the landscape into place.
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Sandra Fowler
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Dr Dillip K Swain 19 October 2022

A wonderful sketch dear Sandra... just fabulous.5 stars! !

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Edward Kofi Louis 04 April 2016

Old trees! ! With the muse of life. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Loyd C Taylor Sr 19 May 2014

Good morning Sandra, a beautiful personification of nature and beautiful wordings, I enjoyed, Loyd

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Original Unknown Girl 26 November 2013

Oh Sandra, your poetry evokes such emotion. Bittersweet this one but nevertheless oh-so-beautiful. HG: -)

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Iris Blue 18 November 2013

This is beautiful Sandra, your personification of nature is second to none. Your words not only paint pictures but they create music too...this is one to savour...

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John Oconnell 12 August 2010

Breathtaking in its diction and content.10

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Eyan Desir 25 November 2009

This is poetry.....good job

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Sally Plumb Plumb 05 October 2009

enjoyed this... especially the last line

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Indira Babbellapati 08 September 2009

'You paint our picture on a passing cloud, ' the imagery stilled me on my tracks!

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Marilyn Lott 14 August 2009

Another amazing journey nestled within your delightful words. Loved it, Sandra! '10! ' Warm Wishes, Marilyn

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Siddharth Singh 09 August 2009

Isn't it a great idea to paint on the clouds that slide across the sky taking the painting around the world. wonderful.

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tom mc quade 13 July 2009

where did you take me? ? ..how did you do that sandra? ? ..a lovely travel in your words..thanks :) tom

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a souls lyric to the soundless music.... amazing words...a lovely write again

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Raj Nandy 13 June 2009

Sandra, Another beautiful piece for all of us to cherish! 10++++ -Raj Nandy

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Naidz Ladia 01 June 2009

'Before it fades like winter from my eyes.'..cloud fades, .very nice picture in your imagination..naizz

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Muhammad Ali 14 May 2009

love these cute lines... this poem! 'Before it fades like winter from my eyes' 10.. Ali

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Andrew Blakemore 01 May 2009

A wonderful portrait Sandra and a real pleasure to read your beautiful image laden poetry. Best wishes, Andrew

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Cindy Kreiner Sera 28 April 2009

Perfection - warm passion radiates from this poem, painted with beautiful images, you are indeed gifted with the heart and soul of a true poet - Cindy

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premji premji 21 April 2009

sky is such a big canvass and god is the painter......but in this cloud portrait, you are the painter....with magic fingers.......absolute delight to read...enjoyed..thanks..

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Mamta Agarwal 12 April 2009

this is such a beautiful poem, I am completely overwhelmed. each line is a poem by itself and can stand alone. through this cloud portrait I see you... warm Regards Mamta

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