A Cloud Of Rain Comments

Nice poem. Just reminds us once again, that Life is Like That! Offers no consolation…

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Yes, life is still going on. A fabulous poem....5 stars

you have left an emptiness that would take time to feel. nice

Life is still going on In one long, long stretch of time... I am not lonely. I can relate to this beautiful poem. Thanks for sharing

great words madam.......good

Life is still going on In one long, long stretch of time- - - great expression- - -beautiful work- - - 10

Hearttouching words straight out of the heart. It is so heard to fill the void left by the absence of a loved one. Time heals surly but slowly.

A dark cloud of rain drifted into my life And for some time, I felt good, happy... I no longer felt lonely....so touching and true. Whatever dark the night be it must get morning. This is really a beautiful poem on life on A philosophical ground.

Life is still going on In one long, long stretch of time... I am not lonely. I can't say I am sad or unhappy. But you have left a void That would take me a long, long time to fill.....fine expression dear poetess..

the pain change gives..lovely caption

Life is still going on In one long, long stretch of time- - - - A very good work

I can't say I am sad or unhappy/But you have left a void/That would take me a long, long time to fill......I find a great poetic beauty here! A fascinating piece of poetry dear madam!

In the span of life void often appears and does vanish naturally when there is engaging. One shouldn't be worried on account of this. Beautiful poem shared. Thanks.

Ma'm, A poem on life's small gifts- quite beautiful and metaphorical

Well, sweet memories left once, remain for ever, even after the source is gone. A very good and novel theme dealt with sweet and simple word play.

Sentiments beautifully echoed in this metaphorical poem.

It would be an existential absurdity to conceive of life without 'ups and down'. Insightful depiction of disappointment in the bliss of love ❤ elegantly penned from inner recesses of the heart. Thanks for sharing Jasbir. Please read my poem POETIC MASTERPIECE.

Yes Jasbir, the void left by love and the loved ones is hard to fill! Nice poem. Thanks for sharing. Do keep writing.

Life is still going on In one long, long stretch of time... I am not lonely. I can't say I am sad or unhappy. But you have left a void That would take me a long, long time to fill. A nice poem talking of ups and downs, meetings and partings. Well furnished, a very touchy poem. Thanks.