Sunday, October 12, 2008

A Cloud Cover Comments

Rating: 5.0

One day there was a whispering on air,
that the sun has refused to glitter,
and the darkness was perpetual
few blamed that the development had it's share
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Deependra Kumar Jha
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dr veenaa rai 10 August 2009

sometimes we need to be shaken up from our dream like paralysed state to realize our own life's worth....lovely...

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Lee Howlett 15 July 2009

a good read deep thoughts

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Vaibhav Pandey 06 January 2009

fantastic write... loved every bit of it.

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C. P. Sharma 27 November 2008

Great poetic talent and a poem with purpose.10 kudos

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Indira Babbellapati 24 October 2008

a poetic presentation of every man's dream!

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Indira Babbellapati 24 October 2008

a poetic presentation of every man's dream!

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Sarah Abdullah 19 October 2008

that the sun has refused to glitter, and the darkness was perpetual Fine Lines... Dreams are part of reality

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Sarwar Chowdhury 19 October 2008

finely penned indeed........10+

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Kesav Easwaran 19 October 2008

A temporary misty cloud on a dream permanent...good piece, Deepen 10

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Seema Chowdhury 12 October 2008

welcome to poem hunter. good poem to start with.

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