A Cloud Came Down Comments

nice poem, and happy idul fitri

Clouds can be beautiful or ominous, here it brings peace and tranquility. Good thoughts and sentiment and speaks of what the world needs in brief.

It gave me a lovely feeling. If you have time try 'Shower.'

Brief poems are the best, this one says more with less. good use of imagery and word flow. thanks for sharing

rain came down..it cools the place..

This sounds like the sort of cloud that most of us need. A nice message. Irene

Cool write........ clouds come down to see us........

great work here Ahmad.....well done!

a fine crafted brief poem with lot of passion....

beautiful clouds that brought in peace.wonderful poem.voted10 suryas

I like that sort of cloud..... Ruthy

A cloud descending on the ground representing peace has finally arrived in a place.

this is a very nice peice :) i loved it

Clouds coming near as rain is a good sign no doubt.

nice symbolistic poem, very well written.......10

A positive, serene and beautiful poem Ahmad. I felt I could drift along with the cloud....10 love Karin

a cloud came down and spread over it kept on coming closer and closer tranquility and reassurance along with peace which descended...beautiful imagination with peaceful messag from heaven. is it not not nature is so kind on us? ? ? ? ? i loved the poem with clever peaceful message....10 read mine watched helplessly...

Tranquility - peace - lovely words which are used in the verse and which remind us to allow these feelings into our lives - - a nice idea for the cloud to introduce them too - - 10 from Fay..

wonderful write..i always watch clouds and see them forming shapes..

very nice and pleasing. thanks for sharing