A Cloud Comments

It's so divinely human......significant....

Embrace what comes our way just like the clouds pouring down without any hesitation. Beautiful poem Nosheen. Happy to be aming my poet friends once again

Very true, fate and destiny go hand-in-hand. Well said. Full *****

cloud has no need anything but need only falling down as drizzling! nice to read

Excellent mother nature gives what's needed, sometimes in abundance and sometimes she makes us wait. It is us who is impatient.

Clouds are, as Nosheen says, "so divinely human/it doesn't care/ what you need". Such a nice poem

Clouds are vagabonds. And is like "Vaprakrida parinatagaja" as Kaalidasa metaphors in Meghasandesham. That is, a dark rain-cloud is like a tusker playing on the riverside sands with her tusks. Marvellous poem, Nosheen. Loved it.