Tuesday, November 14, 2023

A Closed Secret Door With A Hidden Key Comments

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A closed secret door with a hidden key somewhere,
though eyes sees not, mind perceives it deep
mysteries that enshroud the secret of what lies ahead,
so many secrets, before even one is said,
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M. Asim Nehal
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Kesav Venkat Easwaran 14 November 2023

The key is always there. One must go in search of it in life. Wonderful concept

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Zoyza Da Vinka 14 November 2023

Finally, the door opens and reveals a secret I couldn't expect It holds adventures unknown and knowledge I must accept, I liked it.

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Kingsley Egbukole 14 November 2023

Our mind perceives and sees more than our physical eyes. Beautiful poem

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Anjandev Roy 14 November 2023

Profound piece.... extremely well penned...

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 14 November 2023

I love it espeically how you wrapped it up Thanks for sharing and Bravo! ! ! !

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Sylvia Frances Chan 14 November 2023

CONTINUED: Were you able to discover everything? Or will there be a sequel to this? By the way, it was rationally described what was in your brain and it resulted in this exciting poem, I enjoyed it immensely, thanks for sharing

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Sylvia Frances Chan 14 November 2023

unknown adventures and knowledge that I must accept full of mysteries, some more complex than others the mysteries linger as I slowly discover one after another.

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