Wednesday, December 30, 2015

A Closed Desire Comments

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An eye sees
Mind goes and dreams
The rest is stagnant
Through a small hole
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Udaya R. Tennakoon
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Edward Kofi Louis 30 December 2015

Problems of life; but, wih hope. Nice work.

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Udaya R. Tennakoon 30 December 2015

thanks Edward.. Best wishes

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Jayatissa K. Liyanage 30 December 2015

Looking at desires can be better than seeing them. Best would be, not to become crazy about, but to keep desires in captivity. Good luck Udaya for the new year 2016, to come in a matter of hours.

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Udaya R. Tennakoon 30 December 2015

Thank you dear Jayatissa. I wish you all the best for 2016 New year..

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Kumarmani Mahakul 30 December 2015

Closing eyes and observing desires give wonderful feelings in this amazing poem shared here. Wise sharing.10

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Udaya R. Tennakoon 30 December 2015

Thanks Kumarmani.. wish you all the best

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