' ' ' ' ' ' ' ' A Clock Ticks(For Scarlet) Comments

Love, this reads, with its short, short sentences, just like the ticking of that clock! And, so with the death, I cried as well, for the kitty all unknowing...and then, when I read the post script about HOW you came to write this, I cried again, for the woman who died alone. Isn't the human mind just the most amazing thing you ever knew of, to remember so long and to create so quickly....And All done SO well! It is just beautiful.

Grippingly told and with the shortline approach a consistent slow read brings all the potent poignancy to bear in the final lines..... a fine piece throughout Donall....10/10 from Fay...