Friday, October 9, 2009

A Clock, A Street, A Tower Comments

Rating: 2.9

There is a clock on a city street
These pavings that have often known my feet
There is a clock, a street and a tower
That is the mystery of love's power.
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Rani Turton
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Vaibhav Pandey 22 October 2009

all your poems including this one have great emotional spirit....I loved it

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Chris G. Vaillancourt 18 October 2009

This is one astonishingly creative poem.

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Patti Masterman 15 October 2009

This is a very beautiful thing, and there is something kind of magical within it. I really enjoyed it.

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Marilyn Lott 09 October 2009

A poem of reflection also it is laced with sorrow as well. Very heartfelt and deep. Keep writing and sharing - a '10! ' Warm Wishes, Marilyn

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Seema Chowdhury 09 October 2009

very nice poem and it has a nice flow to. it has a touch of pain in it too. take care see some of my new poems Dwell in my soul pg1 Watch the magic happen pg3

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Raj Arumugam 09 October 2009

and all benign beings sit with you on that stone bench to share with you your gentle memories... Thanks for a lovely poem, Rani

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