Wednesday, November 26, 2008

A Clear Recall. Comments

Rating: 5.0

Recalling past events we often find as
Time rolls on, splint'ring golden memories
Into fragments, we need a resolutely
Patient mind, to pick thru' pieces left behind.
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Fay Slimm
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Chitra - 15 December 2008

memories...is something that gives us the hope to keep going 10+ for this memorable poem

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Sandra Fowler 07 December 2008

Love and remembrance-two of the greatest gifts life has to offer. Praise for your nostalgic write. Lovely. Warm regards, Sandra

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Loyd C Taylor Sr 30 November 2008

Hello Fay and what an awesome read, good work! Loyd

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Martin Swords 29 November 2008

Fay.... Flimsy boxes........treasured memories. Martin

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Robert Howard 28 November 2008

A beautifully crafted account of how loving memories are, in no small part, a product of our creativity.

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Sid John Gardner. 28 November 2008

Fay, I really must say that your poetry is marvellous. Like a good wine, to be savoured and in no way hurried. Sid xxx

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Tom Balch 26 November 2008

Dreaming of the past is great if you can leave out the bad bits.10 from Tom

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Fiona Davidson 26 November 2008

Lovely memories brought to mind here...thank you

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Lynda Robson 26 November 2008

I think as we get older we develop selective memory, glossing over the bad bits sometimes, a very good write as always Fay, 10 Lynda xx

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Kris Smith 26 November 2008

So true ageless one that is where I seem to be at the moment looking for something once seen, where did it go, these carelesss hands.10 +++ Chris

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Andrew mark Wilkinson 26 November 2008

You can always skip to the good bit's in your minds eye... Andrew 10

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Fay Slimm

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