A Clear Move Comments

See the world above Stay where ever you are and don't move See it to your self to reach at the end Don't see others as masters but only friends........see the it reasonably....10

may the illusion of the mind, would not change the words of your line....you give us to believe that, the yes would do nothing but to hold on the beginning of faith....very beautiful reflection....God bless a 10 +++

nice poem, i really likes the wording. the fourth stanza was my favoritee. nice job (: keep writting! !

It might have proved too difficult To come out of it with some insult The frustration is in open with result The foundation may be weak even if rebuilt...........ya lack of trust disheartens a person....10