A Clear Emotions Comments

sir, this is a very interesting and descriptive display of emotions. very interesting. i really enjoyed reading it this morning. thanks for sharing. take care

A very clever play of emotions in this poem. It's like battling with the rhyme and rhythm to maintain a sober climax in its flow. I almost wanted to take each first line in the poem to create another emotional rush.....must say it's a good read. Thanks for sharing.