Monday, November 14, 2005

A Clean White Shirt Comments

Rating: 4.8

He had a clean white shirt on
when he died.
The mystics were pleased-
No trail of saliva,
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MARINA GIPPS
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Amberlee Carter 20 June 2007

oh, how i love this...very original and inviting. You have away of bringing the reader to the scene; the mark of a real poet...thank you for that. Always, amberlee

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Charles Chaim Wax 14 November 2005

what a great description fierce and gorgeous a great poem what a fellow seeing into the heart of everything remaining pure sailing in his coffin to heaven and beyond a lovely poem

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MARINA GIPPS

MARINA GIPPS

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