Wednesday, August 14, 2013

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On young and restless heart imposed the 'carefull not to dream.'
A dream is just a dream. Another 'get in trouble thing.'
And why I held this thing so close, this task that I should bring.
For task is just a task without the gamble of a dream.
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Thomas Adams
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Elin Grimes 21 October 2013

Just to note it is careful rather than carefull. However, great poem. I really like this line A dream is just a dream. Another 'get in trouble thing. - brilliant.

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Dave Walker 14 August 2013

Great poem, like it.

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