Monday, July 30, 2007

A Clarification Pre-Departure Comments

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If I died tomorrow,
Would you still search for me?
Would you still scan the skies
Or look out onto the sea?
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Amanda Saveley
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Roger Bowman 30 July 2007

A wonderful poemo Amanda... All the best Roger

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Agnes Török 30 July 2007

This is somehow the uiltimate self-sacrifice... 'Please, do not search for me, I will be waiting there for you.' I have completely fallen in love with the way you use words to put a deeper meaning into them. It is as though every word says as much as an entire sentence otherwise would. There lies seuch agony and pain behind you words and I can see that you have truly understand that joys of life, and that is why you wish not to cause your lover pain, and instead take it upon yourself to bare these emotions. I am truly amazed, by your words and your character. You are truly one of a kind. Thank you for sharing your words and through this a part of your wisdom.

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Amanda Saveley

Amanda Saveley

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