Saturday, September 5, 2020

A Clandestine Affair Comments

Rating: 4.9

Candles and roses
Perfumes and chocolates
An entrancing night
A clandestine affair
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Aarzoo Mehek
COMMENTS
Dr Dillip K Swain 04 July 2022

Loved this wonderful poem entitled, 'A Clandestine Affair'....My pleasure revisiting this beautiful poem.

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 18 February 2022

beautifully romantic especially the first two lines

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Unnikrishnan E S 18 February 2022

Beautifully written, an emotionally charged write. Feigned love makes no impact for "a forlorn heart". Loved reading. Top score. Onto myfav

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Dr Dillip K Swain 18 February 2022

Loved the concept of clandestine affair... nicely put...5 stars.

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Edward Kofi Louis 27 September 2020

Romantic Hours of the night! ! ! Dreaming along! ! ! ! ! Love and art. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Kostas Lagos 05 September 2020

Entrancing...what a beautiful word! Excellent poem!

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Rajnish Manga 05 September 2020

Let's not take it that way. An affair is an affair, a want, a longing for each other between two loving hearts without an ulterior motive. Evaluate with the yardstick of mutual love and mutual respect and human dignity. I think there is a lot of subjectivity in when we talk of 'A Clandestine Affair' and one should not expect a sweeping explanation or generalization. Highly thought provoking. Thanks.

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Varsha M 05 September 2020

I completely agree love needs loads of nurturing and pampering and that is what keeps it alive as evergreen. But this needs to be a two way process. Give and take balance the course uplifting to heights beyond par. Beautiful composition ma'am. Precise but to the point.

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Khairul Ahsan 05 September 2020

A clandestine affair creeps in stealthily in a forlorn heart, not always though. Loved this poem of self introspection.

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