Saturday, December 19, 2015

A Claddagh Ring Comments

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I don't love a radical mischief,
I love an innocent beautiful thief,
who steals the hearts with rosy smiles,
can turn old ones in naughty juveniles,
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Akhtar Jawad
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Bri Edwards 20 December 2015

AKHTAR, , , i doubt i ever heard of one of those rings. surely nobody ever gave me one. you ARE Irish? tell the truth! ! did you know? (i have not read the poem yet) Claddagh Ring Meaning - CladdaghRing.com The way that a Claddagh ring is worn on the hand is usually intended to convey the wearer's romantic availability, or lack thereof. Now I’ll read the poem. can turn old ones in naughty juveniles, ................... how about using into naughty.......? like you and me; i MEAN we can feel like naughty juveniles when confronted with an innocent beautiful thief ! ! “a lovely clad soul in the skin's salt, …………………DO YOU REFER TO A RESIDENT OF “KENT” WHO IS SWEATING A LOT AND THEREFORE HAS SALT ON THEIR SKIN? ? ? ? ? ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! this shall go into my/our a showcase for PH poets in Section B of the December edition, found on my PH site. bri :) maybe i didn't buy the right ring for each of my first three wives? nice poem and nice LONG 'historical' comment below from Marie Shine! bri :)

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Kelly Kurt 20 December 2015

I have some Irish in me. I agree with your message, love all with no bias and be a loyal friend. Thanks, Akhtar

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Kumarmani Mahakul 20 December 2015

Love, loyalty and friendship inscribed in this wise and interesting poem. Having love for all shows greatness definitely and this is nicely interesting poem shared. Fantastic sharing done.10

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Hazel Durham 20 December 2015

Beautiful, moving write with great lines like Is never confined to a single belief, so much universal is the lovely theif To love without any judgement with a pureness of spirit, the Claddagh Ring is a symbol of her belief in love and friendship. Superb write!

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Akhtar Jawad 20 December 2015

Thanks Hazel Durham, I knew this poem will be liked by all but loved by my great Irish friends.

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