Tuesday, December 2, 2008

A City That Shines Comments

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Once past a minute of eternal shadows
Right before the space of emptiness
Vacuums and explosions like volcanoes within
The limits of spoken voice in the void.
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Edwin Empestan (alba) 05 December 2008

Words are like painting instruments to paint a masterpiece. Sometimes a masterpiece would be abstract and real. You as a poet is like a painter still struggling to define on what canvass and brushes are you going to use. But whatever your words in your poem you use still reflects your very 'excellent' and prolific tendency to become a 'seasoned' poet. Go for it! ! !

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T. Alfred Norman

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