A City Song Comments

A well rhyming poem on the City's activities.

I like this poem a lot. I love the flow of it and it describes a bustling city street so well. Good work.

This poem read like a song, it had that beat. Should be set to a melody. Good work.

Magnifique encore. I like your choice of images and words. They match to illustrate and reinforce what is happening and being said. The repetitive phrases (There is a contant____' reinforce this effect.) I like your way of saying things: life's own anthem, blast of soul, newborn rhythm, humanity's heart, and new world beat. Le poème est symphonique.

Such a beautiful poem Rebekah wonderful rhythm and rhyme to it kep writing them