A City Of Sin Comments

Great poem! Did you have some particular city in mind?

A compelling cry against sin my friend!

well captured with the nets of poetry. Very good rhyming, it was not forced. The idea of not punctuating was influenced by the flow, I guess. Good job done fellow. But can there be any city without sin when it is being ruled by humans? Hmm! Very rhetorical

City of sin will soon be vanished! ! A good poem

Really liked it. A really great poem. Good write.