A Cigarette Comments

Beautiful portrayal of lake Martin and its summer morning atmosphere which has changed quite a lot over the years. You have rightly said: The moment of ethereal stillness has gone,

You've captured the great feeling that accompanies ones first puff of the day.

you have captured all these poetic images from the mother nature and made out of them a superb poem that heart touching, and make the reader think twice before going to another line...it deserves 10/10 brilliant+++++

Ah Nice one, nothing bet the stillness in the morning before dawn. Brilliant image u put out here

I appreciate your skill and love of nature which has gone into the creation of this charming landscape but smoking of cigarette will poison the inhaled oxygen rather than adding pure delight into morning air.

wonderful chasing the mind, thought second wise, split second wise.

cigarette smoking is injurious not only to one's body but to the sorrounding atmosphere also...why then?

Ah, you make me wish to lose myself in the place you describe. Fine poem, and you make me want to smoke a cigar.