Saturday, August 17, 2019

A Church I Will Never Forget Comments

Rating: 5.0

I came to this city filled with self pity,
For my friends were all far away.
I sought Sunday school run by the Golden Rule,
For some filled my heart with dismay.
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Shaun Cronick
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Lodigiana Poetess 17 August 2019

What a wonderful memory and sentiment! The wonderful wording really brought this piece to light..Thank you so much for sharing this with us. Lodigiana x

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Shaun Cronick 29 August 2019

And I thank you Lodigiana for your generous and wondrous comment. My apologies for not replying sooner. the demands of work and all that cerfuffle. I now have time off to read your poems. I thank you so much and may God Bless and Keep you. Take care.

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Julia Luber 17 August 2019

Flows like rippling water dappled with rhymes in a river of reverence with community charm. Excellent, practically a singing poem that moves so fluidly through such clever with and rhyme. Delightful!

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Shaun Cronick 18 August 2019

Julia thank you so much. I'm glad you enjoyed it. Pretty soon I'll be having some time off work (two weeks) . I will go through ALL your outstanding poems. You and many, many others here on this wonderful site uplift me and bring out the best in me. I couldn't do it without your comments echoed by others on PH.I thank you again Julia. Take care.

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