I came to this city filled with self pity,
For my friends were all far away.
I sought Sunday school run by the Golden Rule,
For some filled my heart with dismay.
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Flows like rippling water dappled with rhymes in a river of reverence with community charm. Excellent, practically a singing poem that moves so fluidly through such clever with and rhyme. Delightful!
Julia thank you so much. I'm glad you enjoyed it. Pretty soon I'll be having some time off work (two weeks) . I will go through ALL your outstanding poems. You and many, many others here on this wonderful site uplift me and bring out the best in me. I couldn't do it without your comments echoed by others on PH.I thank you again Julia. Take care.
What a wonderful memory and sentiment! The wonderful wording really brought this piece to light..Thank you so much for sharing this with us. Lodigiana x
And I thank you Lodigiana for your generous and wondrous comment. My apologies for not replying sooner. the demands of work and all that cerfuffle. I now have time off to read your poems. I thank you so much and may God Bless and Keep you. Take care.