A Christmas Wish Comments

Nine lines is all it took him to break our hearts. 10

Oh this is so heartbreaking

This is not a poem but the spirit of Christmas coming alive. Cute and lovely. Thanks & Congrats.

Well expressed wish of every good father. I especially like how lacking you are in selfishness at a time of year when so many are too selfish. Well written succinct poem worthy of Poem Of The Day. Congratulations! David, you may like A Poem For My Father and Father and Son. Any feedback and rating would be greatly appreciated. Thank you.

May all your wishes come true.

Sort and sweet, but, Oh so true.

Hope your wish, mine comes true. Short and sweet with so much meaning behind it. Well done for being chosen for the day.

Hope your wish, my wish comes true! Your written word are short but so sweet. And mean so much. Well done for being chosen for the day.

keep wishing for them to be happy and one day they will

Touching with such sentiment in these words. Congratulations on poem of th day.

A great wish for Christmas. Congratulations for having this selected as poem of the day!

David: I have not had the opportunity to look at your other poetry on this site. But this piece is very touching...precious. I will find more of your poetry and I will, per your request, rate. I'm sure I will give them high ratings as well. I only ask that you look for me on this site and rate my pieces as well. And please leave your comment for me to see. Lare Austin