Wednesday, November 28, 2007

A Christmas Tale Comments

Rating: ★5.0

Watching as each child took a turn. Telling the man in red what they wanted for Christmas. Caught in the trance of the season she didn't notice the lights dimming and the shuffles of shoppers slowly fading.

And what is you want for Christmas my dear? Looking surprised, awakened from her holiday dreaming she replied, Romance… can you give me that? Can you wrap a ribbon around … make it real? A tear escaped from blue eyes that had long ago lost their sparkle.
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Patricia Gale
hope christmas red romance standing holiday passion
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Menime Soul..'d' Ugliloner 24 December 2009

Hope is still there..though the romance is long gone. Merry Christmas.

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Rachel Butler 06 November 2009

'What she already had, hope' Rachel Ann Butler

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James Foulk 21 November 2008

a beautiful piece of poetry Patricia well said.

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Ivor Hogg 04 February 2008

Never give up hope it took me seventy years to find my alter ego

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quercus : I've never got paid for my hits... 01 December 2007

This is such a beautiful write :) Such an enchanting tale... We all've got hearts... wonderful :)

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Meggie Gultiano 28 November 2007

a very heartfelt and touching Christmas poem, Sis...

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