Wednesday, June 1, 2005

A Christmas Letter..... Comments

Rating: 4.6

We see each other on the streets
yet, still we look away
we once were called the best of friends
that day is not today
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Sally Nesmith
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Cecil Hickman 14 December 2008

Hello Sally your words are so heartfelt, and your flow is exceptional, , I found this poem posted on another site with my name as the title, , I am sure there is some mistake or at least it was not me, , But I was intrigued by the words that you placed so delicately with wonderful rhyming, I will be looking forward to reading more of your work, , , wow what a way to meet another poet, , , blessings..Cecil

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Lawrence S. Pertillar 25 June 2005

Hi Sally. i understand the 'inner' turmoil, however, the self-sacrifice I don't agree with! to love is painful and no one should make your decision on HOW that love is felt! I like Merry Christmas a lot...

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David Zvekic 02 June 2005

The meter and rhyme is quite good and enjoyable until the very end. I didn't like that it was a suicide note. But I commend you on using rhyme and careful meter. Some 'poets' are of the opinion that poetry neither needs rhyme nor any particular meter to be considered poetry. I am not one of those.

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Sally Nesmith

Sally Nesmith

Savannah Georgia
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