A Christmas Gift. Comments

Hi Geoff: I'm not a big fan of ellipses, though I have used them sparingly. For another take on Christmas day read Borne on a Notion.

Excellent poem Geoff I see what you mean about my poems reminding you of another we kinda have the same ideas :)

Excellent poem Geoff, a truly beautiful poetic gift. What better gift than the gift of Jesus Christ. Melvina

This reads perfectly, and memorably. Gorgeous. t x

This is beautiful Geoff, for no gift is greater than the gift we were given this day. Merry Christmas.............Diane

Dear Geoff This is so heart-felt and beautiful, I love the style and the message, Wonderful piece Love duncan X

Beautiful piece Geoff, the last lines awesome!

This is a great Christmas gift to everyone at PH from you! Wishing you and your family a merry X'mas! ! And another year full of prolific writing: -) Love...TO

Well-written Geoff, Jesus is himself the most precious gift for mankind on Christmas day! No other gift can surpass it. love, Dr John Celes

Sir Goeff, Nice slice of th' absolute concept of the first Christmas..'And HE will be sought out by many...and led to HIS stead, from the paupers to the Kings from the Miller to the Inhereted..all as one, with no bias nor envy, as they have all come to share the same Gift...the blessing of the Child...King of Kings...' MERRY CHRISTMAS GUYS! FJR