Saturday, November 17, 2012

A Chocolate Valentine Comments

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To you this box of Chocolate
to you I am sincere,
as to one I hold so close to me,
as this valentine day appears.
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Michael Chavinda 17 November 2012

Lovely delivery. It is a very sincere poem and one can't help but feel the brokeness and desperation of the persona. A good light hearted poem

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Michael Chavinda 17 November 2012

Lovely delivery. One can't help but feel a certain desperation and brokeness in the giver of the gift. As well as the sincerity

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