Friday, February 8, 2019

A Chocolate Day Comments

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Deep under the restless streams of a river
there is a bed of silver turned so soft for a mermaid.
Her mother is a fairy and she is busy in the kitchen,
Her prince is away, somewhere in the Middle East,
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Akhtar Jawad
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Me Poet Yeps Poet 18 February 2019

we all love chocolates and see ur also relishing your new snap is amiling youth is this one really JA You

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Edward Kofi Louis 09 February 2019

Restless streams! ! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 09 February 2019

She is smiling in her dreams, she knows this year the prince will come back home to smile for only thirty days leave.....lovely expression sir! The title 'Chocolate Day' is captivating....10

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