Thursday, February 7, 2019

A Chirping Bird Tells Me Comments

Rating: 4.9

Comes autumn, follows fall,
Brown leaves begin to fall,
And when it snows in winter,
Trees look like skeletons that can't stir.
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Aniruddha Pathak
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Bharati Nayak 09 July 2020

And when warm winds blow forth, All the nature feels buoyed, Warm weather fosters growth, That cold weather had destroyed. So too happens in human world, Men of cold hearts have little joy, And those of warm bubble with buoy, Tells me a little chirping bird! - - -A very beautiful poem that sings song of hope in despair.

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Mihaela Pirjol 26 February 2020

''So too happens in human world, Men of cold hearts have little joy, And those of warm bubble with buoy, Tells me a little chirping bird! ''- I love this stanza! I appreciate the wisdom of your poetry, Sir!

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Aniruddha Pathak 12 April 2020

Thanks dear poet, your poems I notice have created a special niche.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 24 January 2020

A great poem sir! I love birds! Your poem tells a lot about the delicate heart of a chirping bird! I thought of reading your last stanza again so I revisited this magnificent piece of poetry! May I quote those wonderful lines, " So too happens in human world/Men of cold hearts have little joy/And those of warm bubble with buoy/Tells me a little chirping bird! ....Just beautiful!

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Aniruddha Pathak 25 January 2020

A great poet reader visiting again my poem, 'what can you wish for more than that? ' An opening line of another poem of mine. And I would say, adhikasya adhikam phalam...Meaning, more the grace, more the fruits of reward. Thanks

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Evelyn Judy Buehler 13 December 2019

One can learn a lot from a little bird. Thanks for this lovely poem. :)

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Aniruddha Pathak 13 December 2019

And often that chirping little bird is our own reflection. Thanks for visiting and welcome to my poems, dear poet.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 06 November 2019

A very cute poem sir! ...And those of warm bubble with buoy/Tells me a little chirping bird! I just try to have a deep dive into the depth of this expression...absolutely fascinating! I derive great pleasure reading this wonderful poem time and again with utmost joy and satisfaction!

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Aniruddha Pathak 06 November 2019

I just try to have a deep dive into the depth of this expression...absolutely fascinating! I derive great pleasure reading this wonderful poem time and again with utmost joy and satisfaction! (Report) . It's pleasure to read your valuable comments, dear poet.

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Men of cold hearts have little joy. Very significant

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Aniruddha Pathak 23 October 2019

Yes, you have picked the very crux, and thank you for visiting this poem.

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Archita Kumar 07 October 2019

A wonderful poem related to nature.A wow poetic skill.The way you reflected the birds talk with the changing of seasons gives a more environmental impact.

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Aniruddha Pathak 08 October 2019

Thanks dear Archita Kumar for your two wonderful comments.

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Archita Kumar 07 October 2019

Wonderful poem related to nature.

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Anjandev Roy 01 September 2019

So too happens in human world..........true. Thank u, dear poet. anjandev roy.

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Aniruddha Pathak 01 September 2019

Yes, I see your point, thank for the feedback.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 30 July 2019

So too happens in human world/Men of cold hearts have little joy/And those of warm bubble with buoy/Tells me a little chirping bird! Sparkling poetic expression sir! My pleasure reading this fabulous poem time and again! To MyPoemList

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Aniruddha Pathak 31 July 2019

Thank you so much Dr Swain, readers like you that truly appreciate inspires poets to write well.

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Bernard Snyder 27 July 2019

Indeed we shall! I don't log on every day or night, but feel free to leave a message from time to time!

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Aniruddha Pathak 28 July 2019

Most of this might emanate from the comments we make on the poems we read and like. Thanks.

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Rajnish Manga 27 July 2019

What a beautiful analogy between different seasons and human nature. Thanks for this inspiring poem. Hearty Congratulations for this POD.

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Aniruddha Pathak 28 July 2019

Your comments often bring in a new focus. Thanks for the feedback.

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Savita Tyagi 26 July 2019

A cold heart dwells in its own anguish while a warm heart spreads. Congratulations for this lovely poem to be selected as member poem.

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Aniruddha Pathak 26 July 2019

Your feedback is always interesting to read, thanks for appreciating the poem.

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Akhtar Jawad 26 July 2019

Congrats! It; s a magnificent poem and a well deserved selection as member's poem. Life is also divided in seasons. The four " aashrams" of Indian culture very well illustrate it.

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Aniruddha Pathak 26 July 2019

Beautiful dear poet AJ, you always have a unique observation, and thanks good words.

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Malabika Ray Choudhury 26 July 2019

Congratulations on your poem being chosen as POD. A lovely, sweet (what can be sweeter than a little chirping bird?) , yet thoughtful poem with deep feelings about Nature! Thank you.

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Aniruddha Pathak 26 July 2019

Thanks dear poet MR for appreciating the poem. A chirping bird early in the morn really makes one's day, well said.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 26 July 2019

A wonderful poem imbued with wisdom and insight. The third stanza is the heartbeat of this poem, imparting a meaningful message to humanity. A nice theme, rhyme and compelling imagery. Congratulations for a truly deserved accolade. I am happy to see one of the brilliant Poet's beautiful poems in this category.

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Aniruddha Pathak 26 July 2019

Thank you indeed dear poet Rose Marie, for the kind sentiments for me and my poem. I appreciate you always taking some time to express your views.

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Kevin Patrick 26 July 2019

The imagery alone is spellbinding, a sweet and sentimental work extolling the beauty of natures bounty. Wonderful choice for poem of the day, well deserved honour!

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Aniruddha Pathak 26 July 2019

Many thanks dear KP for the kind encouraging words

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Edward Kofi Louis 26 July 2019

Muse of love and life! ! Seasons and reasons. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Aniruddha Pathak 26 July 2019

Thanks for reading the poem and feedback, and I did notice your brief absence.

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Julia Luber 26 July 2019

Nice contemplation of the seasons and their ranging powers!

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Aniruddha Pathak 26 July 2019

Many thanks dear poet JL

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Bernard Snyder 26 July 2019

Short and sweet this poem is. Congrats on having it being chosen as 'POD'.

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Aniruddha Pathak 26 July 2019

Thanks indeed, let us have more interactions, dear BS.

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