it's too vulnerable, too breakable
to carry the weight of
the waters running through
these seven hundred and thirty-
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This is a fantastic meditation on the fragiity of beauty, but goes much deeper than that and seems to say that we need to protct and cherish it. I like the way that there is no suggested definition of beauty and that it seems that it is something for us to discover ourselves. The final two lines seem to sum up the discourse. Wonderful.
Another wonderfully descriptive poem, I love the power you pack into your work, tempered with a subtlety that provokes deep thought. inspiring stuff indeed, Regards, Lucy