Friday, September 16, 2011

A Chill Comments

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a chill in the air,
drinking coffee, and listening
for the groan
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Eric Cockrell
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Adeline Foster 16 March 2012

OK, I'll admit this is good. The subject does crystalize and follow through. Read mine - Cicatrix - Adeline

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Jim Troy 18 September 2011

This is one of your breath takiing beauties that one can just slide right on in and wear it in comfort and in love. You've got the ink sizzeling lately... I love it... Jim Troy

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Patti Masterman 16 September 2011

'eyes undressing your heart'- just a fabulous line! (I'm almost jealous!) . I can feel this is inspiring me to write something. The best poems- before you're halfway through them- your mind jumps ahead in excitement, like a horse barely reined in.

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