a chill in the air,
drinking coffee, and listening
for the groan
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This is one of your breath takiing beauties that one can just slide right on in and wear it in comfort and in love. You've got the ink sizzeling lately... I love it... Jim Troy
'eyes undressing your heart'- just a fabulous line! (I'm almost jealous!) . I can feel this is inspiring me to write something. The best poems- before you're halfway through them- your mind jumps ahead in excitement, like a horse barely reined in.
OK, I'll admit this is good. The subject does crystalize and follow through. Read mine - Cicatrix - Adeline