A Childs Heartache Comments

I think the sentiment here is very beautiful. Sincerely, Mary

This is not the sort of poem I would normally like and I dont find the structure all that stimulating... but lines such as: 'My eyes no longer see the colours, My ears no longer hear the joy' and ' If i could live one hundred years, Time could not erase' are very very VERY beautiful. Thanks for posting, I enjoyed.