Saturday, April 11, 2009

A Childs Dream Comments

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One night, a child fell asleep,
And she began to dream, so very deep,
As an angel crept into her mind,
But, oh, was she very blind,
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Amy Gibbs
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Mel Vincent Basconcillo 12 April 2009

a child's dream is pure and innocent just like this poem brilliantly written

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Fiona Davidson 12 April 2009

Great write Amy...10+++

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James Mclain 11 April 2009

Upon this pillow yours in sleep the angel seeks your heart to ease.. thank you for this poem..iip

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Sue Sie 11 April 2009

Awww these are very tender thought out words... lovely and comforting...10..well done

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Mel Vincent Basconcillo 11 April 2009

i like this poem.. smooth and amazing.. nice to read

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