A Childs Dark 'Help Me' Cries Comments

Beautifully yet hauntingly written. I get it completely, I've been the one crying. Beautiful..truly beautiful.10

only a person who has lived through such a terrible ordeal could write such a poem that made me have goosebumps, chills and tears through out this sorrowful tale..good job on making this horrible situation into a gorgeous poem..great writing..10s again, my new petic friend..you've kept me on my toes with the diversity of your poems..you are truly talented for you've written poems that have covered all sorts of topics, not just love nor heart breaks, but poems i would have never thought were a good subject, and you've turned them into a sensational view of things.10s all the way

i thought i was i was going to be bored or exhausted from the long theme of this poem, but i had tears in my eyes and goosebumps all over me while i was reading it..great job...10s

alot of people see and hear crime and look the other way.alot of people who are victims of crime are so ashamed it happened to them they dont report it, but children should never feel ashamed, as parents adults and teachers we are supposed to protect them, if children were supposed to have the itellection of adults, they would be born smarter then adults..those neighbors should be arrested for accomplices

I know many a child that hsare this story...... thanks.. lady.. you have lots to say. good. do you have essays?