Thursday, September 3, 2009

A Childs Cry Comments

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laying in bed looking up at the ceiling
my eyes got blurry, and my head started reeling.
i saw a vision start to take form
of a child who was unborn.
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louis rams
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Bharati Nayak 29 January 2019

this young mother was under peer pressure to take this childs life and it did not matter if it was wrong or right. this young child was screaming at me 'how could they let this be' i am life given by the lord why would she want to abort.- - - -Abortion is a complex issue.It involves religious, moral and social issues..A young unmarried mother is not to be blamed solely for abortion.We should address the factors that lead to unwanted pregnancies.

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Louis Rams 29 January 2019

again I thank you for coming to my page and reading my poems of every day life and pains women go thru

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Ahmad Shiddiqi 16 September 2009

Strong and awesome. Keep writing!

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Kranthi Pothineni 14 September 2009

A message for social awareness is composed very beautifully with a sensitive feel.

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Christine Kerr 05 September 2009

You sure have away of turning thoughts around 10++

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Samanyan Lakshminarayanan 05 September 2009

a hearfelt write against abortion...the last verse is very touching...10

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i agree. kids are gift from God.

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~ Jon London ~ 03 September 2009

This is a powerful piece louis...different to your usual topics...a thought provoking piece for sure my friend...

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