A Children's Poem.... Comments

Grandma still has a Fiat " weg-luis" car. This is very well. Grandmother is always clever and affectionate. We've had much fun and sun, you can hear in this song. Grandmother is ever nice. Children are ever happy with grand mother. This children's song is excellent song definitely. An amazing poem is very brilliantly penned.10

Beautifully rendered, A Children's Poem, There is spontaneity, and child's play.

There is a nice flow and rythym that when read it is mellifluous. So vividly depicted as if the reader.is with the children seeing a wonderful place. Liked how the great Poetess included grandma in this poem. So full of love and care for the elderly. Beautifully crafted write.10++++++++

What a wonderful poem for childern. A lively and lovely write. Very heartwarming and informative.

Thank you dear Sylvia for sharing this beautiful poem! enjoyed reading! 10+++