Friday, November 21, 2014

A Children Day At School Comments

Rating: 5.0

I drop her to school every early morning,
Not a fatigue to pick up a fairy that's charming,
A fairy is she in her lovely uniform,
A bag too heavy perhaps to perform,
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Adeeb Alfateh 30 July 2019

I wish a nice day and for joys I pray, Activities at school though extracurricular, Change mood of a child concentric-n- circular. excellent expression good10++++

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Umar Hashmi 03 December 2015

I liked this beautiful poem...................

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Farhan Mirza 03 January 2015

Nice structure and word choice. I enjoyed your poem. Keep it up.

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Ruma Chaudhuri 02 December 2014

A beautiful poem. And yes, The fragrance of this poem will survive for a long long time in my memory. The school bag is heavy. That is really a problem for the children. And Grandfather realise the tears and smile of pretty pink grand daughter. That's so nice. Overall, Its an excellent poem I read today. But I know your all poems are so nice and beautiful.

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Asma Hashmi 25 November 2014

A truely inspiration

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Valsa George 21 November 2014

Little ones look forward to Children's Day when they don't have to carry the heavy satchel on their backs.... a day meant for fun and play! Above everything, a day when they can wear colour dress and flit like butterflies! A beautiful poem! Enjoyed!

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Salini Nair 21 November 2014

a social issue explained in a poetic way, , , , , nice work

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Khalida Bano Ali 21 November 2014

A very true problem..............10

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