Monday, February 11, 2013

A Childhood Summer Comments

Rating: 4.9

I remember those long hot Summers as if they were yesterday,
When the sun shone down on our street, the place I loved to play.
For many a window glistened, cleaned well to a sparkling shine,
Where starched white shirts blew gaily, on many a washing line.
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Jayne Louise Davies
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Emma Mcullough 23 July 2025

Aww! What a sweet poem so full of memory and happiness! ! ! A truly lovely peice and a real glory! ! ! ! Thanks for brightening my day! ! ! x

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Rebecca Navarre 21 September 2024

So beautifully beautifully shared! .. Love the feeling of such heart warming sentiments! .. Endless 10' S And Stars! ..+++++++++++++++++++

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Jayne Louise Davies 29 September 2024

Many thanks Rebecca

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Rebecca Navarre 21 September 2024

Ever ever so beautifully painted! .. With such beautiful heart and soul! .. Such wonderful memories to hold and treasure through out life! ..

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Rebecca Navarre 21 September 2024

Ohh, How very precious these beautiful and sentimental memories! .. So beautifully composed! ..

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PREMKUMAR C N 08 December 2022

Beautiful poem dipped in nostalgic memories. Like a painting, the images are so vivid.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 03 February 2022

A most beautiful poem of sweet memories, nostalgia Jayne, aptly worded 5 Stars.I have enjoyed tremendously

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Jayne Davies 03 February 2022

Thank you Sylvia x

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Kim Barney 02 February 2022

A great poem full of nostalgia. The 'Good Old Days' are full of fond memories.

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Jayne Davies 03 February 2022

Thank you Kim! It was a great time, with fond memories.

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Craig Moses Uche 31 December 2021

I love the ending of this poem and it brings back some memories for me too, congrats on a beautiful poem

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Jayne Davies 02 January 2022

Thank you Craig.

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Craig Moses Uche 31 December 2021

This poem is truly imaginative, you are a wonderful writer. Please consider reading a few of my poems as well like 'Let's Grow Up Together'

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Jayne Davies 02 January 2022

Thank you. I look forward to reading your poems.

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Bri Edwards 23 December 2021

you used an apostrophe in 'Summer's' twice. Too bad it should be 'Summers'. Ha ha. You're forgiven. bri ;) I liked the poem. Thanks.

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Jayne Davies 25 December 2021

What am I like! I will correct that asap 😊 Thank you

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Nick Krakana 27 November 2013

well done I enjoyed your write

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Andrew Daglish 06 September 2013

you must be a northern lass. very nice poem

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Jayne Davies 04 May 2013

Thanks for the kind comment! Glad you like it x

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G.R. Gaus 03 May 2013

Memories of childhod seem sacred now as we approach our later years, my brother and i still reminicse so we won't forget. very nicely written.....

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Jayne Louise Davies

Jayne Louise Davies

Abercynon, Rhondda Cynon Taff
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