Saturday, November 25, 2017

A Childhood Memory With My Father Comments

Rating: 5.0

My father
Made up stories
Just for me
So short
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Rose Marie Juan-austin
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Belle Wassermeister 24 August 2024

Great memories, great poem!

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Sylvia Frances Chan 24 August 2024

The starting alineas makes me to wish to read more and my reading ended in having read not only about an adorable father, but a gem that is produced from your deep love for your father. He makes you his heroine! This gem, this masterpiece goes to myFavourites!

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Sylvia Frances Chan 24 August 2024

Very beautiful and touching heaviest the inside of my heart, Presented in great brilliance, a father's love, crystal clear. Thank you so much for sharing these adorable cherished moments with your dear father

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Aniruddha Pathak 16 February 2020

This poem brings to fore the special feelings a daughter has for her father, and in a unique way. It made me lose in the world of a daughter of mine who was my daughter hardly for a day of her life. A lovely piece, to My Poem List.

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Aniruddha Pathak 16 February 2020

Yes, you do like a bird queen soar in open wide skies as a poetry queen, I'm sure about it.

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Rosie Bourget 02 February 2020

A wonderful way to pay a well deserve tribute to your wonderful dad. This poem brings back memories. It reminds me of the unforgettable humorist father of mine. Having a father figure in our lives is a gift. Great job Marie!

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Shaun Cronick 29 August 2019

This is a fine and heartfelt tribute to your father Rose Marie. Cleary a man of good character and substance. Thank you for sharing a snapshot of one of your childhood memories.10+++ and to my treasure chest.

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Valsa George 03 May 2019

As children, listening to stories is always a thrill. If the story is fabricated around us and if we become the central character of the story, it becomes all the more fascinating. If it is narrated by the father or mother, our interest will be double.....! I can easily guess what a warm relationship you and your father shared. The advice at the end of the story is so charming Soar like a heroine And queen But always land Like an angel." .

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Kumarmani Mahakul 26 September 2018

I will always cherish His bedtime stories For it always ended in me Living happily Ever after.....so touching and impressive. Your father had immense love for you. It is a great tribute to him. Thanks for sharing again.

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Fantastic is the fidelity of a father! That reality is captured in this compelling and creative composition!

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Akhtar Jawad 03 May 2018

Such a lovely poem. I also do the same what your father did. I tell stories to my grandchildren making them heroes/heroines of the stories. The like my stories.

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Mr. Mister 20 April 2018

Lovely poem. Loved it. Very touching.10

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Sansan 22 March 2018

A heart warming poem ✍💕

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Jun R Juan 20 March 2018

Simple yet adorable memories of a child. Love to read again and again

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Indira Renganathan 16 March 2018

Rose, you are surely an adorable poet as much as you adore your father and your father adores you ..... your poems are very much exciting and interesting...thanks a lot...stay blessed for ever

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Edward Kofi Louis 11 March 2018

Just for me! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Bipasha D 25 February 2018

You have such beautiful memories of childhood. Excellent presentation

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Zabeth 20 December 2017

Loveeely manang ko😊

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 21 December 2017

Wow, Zabeth I am glad you are here. Thank you so much for the lovely comment. I will always treasure your effort of being here. You inspired my pen!

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Muzahidul Reza 04 December 2017

My father Made up stories Just for me So short But they always had the touch Of magic. Really great memory, excellently pictured in this poem, thanks for sharing the poem with us, +++++++ 10

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 07 December 2017

Thank you for the great comment, Muzahidul. Your visit is very much appreciated.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 26 November 2017

Childhood memories bring pleasant in adulthood. Dear Rose, you have so nicely inscribed this poem through the stories from a loving father. Beautiful poem shared. Thanks.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 01 December 2017

Your great comments are very much.appreciated, Kumarmani. Thank you so much for the visit.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin

Rose Marie Juan-austin

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