Monday, October 20, 2014

A Childhood Game Comments

Rating: 4.5

While playing a childhood game
these knees took the fall

With proper medication
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Heather Burns
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Md Asadullah 24 October 2014

Last line of the poem shows your determination to be always number one, thanks for the share 10/10

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Ramesh Rai 21 October 2014

Game is always to win. Lovely write. Regards

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Gangadharan Nair Pulingat 21 October 2014

A beautiful poem with simple images and liked it..

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