Wednesday, June 23, 2010

A Child's World Comments

Rating: 4.7

Welcome to my world
Some say it's a simple place
Well that may be so
But at least, there's always a smile on my face
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Ray Hansell
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Suresh Kumar Ek 18 October 2020

POEM REFLECTS Childlike innocence poetically

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Cowboy Ron Williams 02 July 2020

Your world sounds like a great place to visit (or to live) ! I have five poems, but they are not activated yet. Why does it take so long for a new poet? Some of them were posted three days ago!

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R.sai vignesh 05 April 2019

The child will be always ________ Please tell me the answer

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Chinedu Dike 16 March 2019

A fine and lofty verse written in persuasive expressions with artistic brilliance. A work of an intricate mind. Thanks for sharing.

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Roseann Shawiak 15 January 2019

Excellent poem, really enjoyed the underlying peace I felt while reading it. Thank you for sharing it. RoseAnn

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Akhtar Jawad 31 March 2018

I join you in welcoming to your wold. A lovely poem.

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Mohammad Skati 14 November 2014

This is a great poem that has its great echo on the world of childhood.

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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi 14 November 2014

Is the child's world this simple? ? Yes, I may want to live a idealistic world of yours, during my rebirth...Thank you for sharing such a concept of child's world, which they forget every twenty minutes when they are below three years old...That is the reason they repeatedly do the same thing, though we warn them many times...

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Gangadharan Nair Pulingat 14 November 2014

The children's world is full of innocence and happiness and this is a poem showing the full thoughts of a childhood and welcoming the child's world and it is highly appreciated in all respects.

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 14 November 2014

Children or the child's world is a garden of smiling flowers..thank you

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Liliana ~el 14 November 2013

Great poem but quite untrue... unless you're only considering those four and younger. Children can be naive but today's children are exposed to the real world very early and are maturing fast.

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Leslie Philibert 14 November 2013

Like the message, even if the poem lacks depth.

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James William 08 January 2013

I would definitely come to your world, because I am tired of living in this world where there's hateful, where i live my life in fear, i would come to your world to be blessed, and to live without fear. I am in love with your poem..

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Babatunde Aremu 14 November 2012

This poem put the mind of the reader in a blissful state. The world is seen from pleasantness and optimism. Great write.I like it.

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Jasbir Chatterjee 14 November 2012

I simply love your world...thanks a lot for such a warm welcome...

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Baru Gobira 18 July 2010

There isn't a day of late that Ive not felt the wish to go back to my childhood world. I admire the strength of simplicity and its unending reach achieved in your poem. -Baru Gobira

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