A Child's Supplication! Comments

NOW, to put into the June showcase, with note about Ameen being the Arabic pronunciation. and i'll leave knowst as you typed it, unless you decide to have me change to knowest, and tell me so. Thanks for responding so quickly. bri :)

what does the Poet's Notes mean? is the poem written by you or by a Professor? i want to use this poem in my/our June 2017 showcase, but i want to be sure of the author's name as i use the author's name in the showcase. Thanks. bri :) ========================= note: in these lines: Thou knowst our deep folds and layers Unto Thee I send my prayers..............the spelling of knowst is questioned. from Wiktionary: knowest Contents 1 English 1.1 Alternative forms 1.2 Etymology 1.3 Verb 1.4 Quotations English Alternative forms know'st (obsolete) Etymology know +‎ -est Verb knowest (archaic) second-person singular simple present form of know Quotations For usage examples of this term, see Citations: knowest. so know'st is obsolete - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - favorite lines: Leave us not our Gracious God Save us from all evils odd........................how about the evils even? ? i assume the TWO es in Ameen is to emphasize/lengthen the word. i wonder if AmeN or Amenn would seem 'better' to me. i'll use the poem as it is if you answer me about the poet's notes. i may use it anyway if i don't hear from you in a week or less. Thanks. bri :)

A sincere and loving prayer for all your beloveds! May your prayers be answered dear poet pal!

An unbiased and honest supplication to become a true human being.... amazing

a prayer to almighty....prayer of the world...like it

And less you become like a child, you shall not enter into the Kingdom of Heaven. I certainly am not God, but Shahzia, it seems to me your heart is already in the right place.

A sincere prayer devoid of all malice......rememberd the dua lab pe aati hai dua banke tamanna meri...sweet n simple

Thank you for all of your lovely comments on my poems. I too have enjoyed yours. I truly enjoyed - A Child’s Supplication! The flow is so exact and pleasurable even musical. May I make a suggestion? There is only one ‘e’ in amen. The third stanza could read - Pour upon us heavenly light – Only to keep the meter flowing. I liked the way you used a capital letter for the word Knower. As you see the teacher in me can’t be hidden. Adeline

its a very nice nd humble suplication may Allah fulfill it Ameen

Grace our minds with blessings to read each line is like to sip nectar of heaven

Aamin....poem is cute in its opus....a lovely poem with its rhyme & rhythmic effect...Sound enchanting

fabulous! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! it's a cute prayer! ! ! ! ! ! ! stay blessed!

Wooooooooooo! thats a lot of loving.

This ought to be every child's prayer. Great write Shahzia.

A wonderful prayer.The rhyme scheme ab ab is nicely used.

amen........., your poem and your pray that what we need to break through the horrors of war in our world SO let we all to pray with you for the peace and prosperity, thanks

A child's thoughts and wishes so beautifully written with such innocence and sincerity! Very inspired write!

Beautiful prayer-poem like. The stanzas follow each other so smoothly. A child's prayer is always heard, for their heart is always unalloyed. Thank you for sharing. Best regards, ~Besa

Shahzia, a wonderful supplication to God praying for all, for His mercy ! The poem is beautifully worded with rhyme and rhythm! Loved it!

Very much a prayer, and a lovely one Shahzia. Very well written.