Wednesday, March 27, 2019

A Child's Still Alive In You Comments

Rating: 5.0

If you still like to get wet in rain,
Every bird if to you sings as sweet,
If floral fragrance is rare treat,
Talking to stars never be in vain,
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Aniruddha Pathak
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Indira Renganathan 23 June 2019

'Rejoice wild as only you still can, A child still thrives in you along man.'....lovely encouragement to the longing persons...very thoughtfully crafted

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Aniruddha Pathak 24 June 2019

Yet another old piece, though not so old, thanks for the feedback.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 27 March 2019

An excellent poem, sir Aniruddha....10++++++++++++

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Aniruddha Pathak 28 March 2019

Let me welcome your feedback, some comments always reinforce the poet in you. Thank you Bernard Asuncion.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 27 March 2019

Birds like to get wet in rain and every bird sings sweetly. Every flower may not give fragrance but many give it to all. An interesting poem is very brilliantly penned. This is an excellent sharing done.

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Aniruddha Pathak 28 March 2019

Perhaps an old man like me knows how important is it to keep the child within alive. Thank you Kumarmani Mahakul.

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