Sunday, May 13, 2007

A Child's Snowy World Comments

Rating: 4.5

Oh what fun when it snows
It's a little boy's delight
To tromp around in snow knee deep
His world so crystal and white
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Marilyn Lott
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Margaret O Driscoll 08 May 2016

Very special to witness, Marilyn

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 30 April 2016

A very little and lovely poem for those who love kids. I think you might have been through a lovely childhood. Thanks for the poem dear poetess.10 for it. Subhas

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Patti Masterman 22 September 2009

LIke this picture you've painted. Snow was always so magical in childhood wasn't it? Before we grew up and it just seemed like added work, lol. (smile)

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Teresa Dearing 14 September 2009

I wonder if he'd play with me, after all I'm only 9. Delightful, T

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Ken E Hall 12 September 2009

Lovely memories of our childhood with this snowfall romp I think you are a child at heart....it's a little boy's delight Thanks for the read Marilyn regards

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Bob Blackwell 08 May 2009

Lovely observation, the innocence of youth, its only later that we start to feel the cold. 10++

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Mamta Agarwal 17 October 2008

squash life's little problems, like a snow ball that was hurled.lovely poem. seeing the world through child's eye, and connecting with a child in ourselves10

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Kesav Easwaran 30 September 2008

'He puts himself into outer space This precious little child! ' i liked this line very much...amazing way of observing life around...you have come out with artful lines, Merilyn...good poem 10

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Seema Chowdhury 15 April 2008

very sweet poem. i really loved it. very imaginative and full of life.

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Raul Castelan 08 June 2007

My, my, my, the way you went about it was so dear to hear. Even though I have never seen snow in my life but on tv, you depicted it so well here. You have artistry, I do say.

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Duncan Wyllie 27 May 2007

Beautiful poem, full with wisdom, feelings came across intact, I love it Thankyou for sharing your art Love duncan X

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Tracy Rollings 26 May 2007

Great poem about a Child's life, I guess I never got a real good chance to see it that way, Look forward with excitement And with a child’s innocent cheer! , great write, keep it up.10 your friend Tracy

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Sandra Fowler 13 May 2007

The magical world of the child. Something that once was, but can never quite be again. Very nostalgic. Lovely poem. Warm regards, Sandra

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