A Child's Scientific Religious Experiment Comments

This is like Silverstein channeling Poe. It should be accompanied by a drawing of a kid looking into a well with flames shooting out of it and burning his hair off. Very well done.

Your delicious style, coupled with your interesting subjects and your irreverent titles make you a force to contend with and a future addiction. Very charming.

Hey, so it was you watching me dropp my coin in the well: -D Ruth..... another good poem.

Short, impressive and truly fine in content. arya

lol i agree w/ helen...a muffled plump, that has such a weirdly cool sound to it...good use of that term, first time i've heard muffled and plump together..sweet write

Very nicely done. Pictures and sounds. Nice spacing too. The title adds a lot of dimensions which would have been otherwise missed.

'A muffled plumpf'..... that says so much! ! The sound resonates now as I read those words! Great piece of poetry - mission accomplished Chuck! HG: -) xx

hahahah you have some really interesting and witty poetry! Great job

nice one short, but to the point

Intriguing imaginative read with a superb title. love, Allie xxxxxxxxxxx

A nice 'dry' humour which, as it should, leaves much to the fertile imagination...I enjoyed this :) Jack. PS. Thanks for the kind reviews.

Stumbling to find our change in just a short moment, a great write from you again Charles Well done, we continue to read from your book of tallent, Love Duncan

That's the mind of the child you've painted their alright, Charles! ! Laughingly, Gina.

*Reaching into my pocket, searching for loose change... * dan

Kids are always placing bets with God. If this spit falls all the way from this bridge ontp that tugboat, I will become a priest!

Either way (here or at PIM) , this is funny on a lotta levels - love the title!